The Parents
His eyes
opened in a dark and cold world but suddenly there was a light. All his
surroundings were filled with colors. There he saw the two faces of his mother
and father. His mother had bright eyes of blue and a smooth curved face with moist
lips and a pointed nose, with soft ears and blonde hair. His father had dark
green eyes with a smart curved face, pointed lips curled into a smile with long
ears and a nose with beautiful curves.
After the Dispatch
Malcom slept
and slept until he started moving. His parents Honey and James got into their car
to go home. They played with Malcom and said “whose mommy’s little cutie!” said
Honey. “whose daddy’s little tough guy huh?!” said James. They all loved him
soooooo much. They gave him various things to eat. Some were yellow in color
while some were white, some were green and some were red. Malcom was amazed at
the taste of the food they gave him. He felt lovely and at nights he had a cozy
blanket and a comfy bed. Slowly his eyes fell and there his beautiful or funny
dreams began. In his dreams he was flying very fast and leaving everyone
behind. His tremendous speed made his parents love him even more. They cheered
for him and shouted his name. When they went back home, they gave him all sorts
of toys to play with. All of the toys were very amazing and he used to drink
his mother’s milk most of the time. Boom! His eyes were filled with light. He
had woken. His parents were shouting at each other saying, “what does the doctor
mean he is abnormal!” said honey. James said, “The doctor said he had powers.
He didn’t tell what!”. “Why doesn’t the doctor know what powers??!!!” said his
mother. “I don’t know! He just said his report was abnormal!” said his father.
“if the doctor doesn’t know then we’ll take him to an astrologer!” said Honey.
“Fine. We’ll take him to an astrologer tomorrow.” said James. “No, we’ll take
him today and by today, I mean right now!” said Honey. “Fine.” said James.
Honey went to pick Malcom up, changed his nappies and dressed him in yellow.
His father wore jeans and a shirt and Honey wore a half-sleeves T-shirt with
jeans. Malcom wore a yellow hat as it was cold for a baby who is 8 months old.
At the Astrologer
Malcom’s
father drove angrily. He turned left then right then left and left again and
stopped. Malcom sat in his mother’s lap. They got out of the car and started
walking up the stairs. Honey whispered to James, “He didn’t cry since he was
born.”. James was shocked but didn’t show it. They entered the lift and pressed
the button for the 5th floor. Zoom! Up they went and the doors
opened. They walked for room no.507 and rang the bell. The door opened as soon
as they rang the bell. Inside was a woman with a cloak and a hood covered her
eyes and nose, only her mouth was to be seen. “Yes, my liege. Please do come
in” she said in a bellowing voice. Honey and James stepped in and saw a house
fully dark with only three ancient oil lanterns for light. Malcom smiled at the
woman. The woman also smiled at Malcom. Honey and James looked at each other’s faces
then at Malcom and the woman. Honey said in amazement, “This is the first time
he has smiled!”. The woman told her “Hmmm. I see that the boy will do great
things, great things for the universe!” the woman said in a peculiarly soft
voice. She lifted her hood and opened her cloak. “Turns out she’s a common
girl” said James in a sad voice. “My name is Jenny. And I have told you that he
will do great things but all great things must come with a cost. He will have
to hide during the night as if he goes out in the night, his fears will come
true. The whole earth will shake and blast into smithereens! He can go into
space and that won’t hurt him but keep him indoors at night and don’t install
fears in him. It’s for the sake of this world.”. Both Honey and James were
shocked and gave the girl $50 in awe and went home.
The Outcome
It was about 5:49
pm at that time. It was getting dark and the animals had started to come out. “Come
dear, let us go quickly. You know what the astrologer said.” Said honey. “Yes, I
know. We will run to our house? Ok?” said James, “fine” said honey. They got
ready. Honey held Malcom tightly in her arms. They opened the door and ran like
never before straight to their home on the 2nd floor. Malcom laughed
all the way to their home. “Hai. Ayya goo booboo. Haa, haaa, haaa, haa”. Laughed
Malcom. James unlocked the door and hit the sack. Everyone went to sleep and
Malcom started dreaming. In his utopia he was the king of the universe and he
was sitting on a chair made of diamonds! All around him sat 5 men and 6 women
with a blinding light behind their heads. One of them spoke, “Malcom the ruler
of the universe, the slayer of the great serpent, the savior of the poor, the
creator, the great one, you are our master”. Said a very muscular man with an
olive leaf crown. Malcom tried to speak but no words came out, he tried to move
but couldn’t. The women dressed in a robe with elegant hair spoke, “Dearest Malcom
we give you your first mission”. Another man stood and spoke, “you have to go
to the planet Uranium x42056 and defeat a Cyclopes with 16 heads and unlimited
weapons. You have the time of three months.” And a bright light flashed and
Malcom woke. But this time floating in mid – air. Malcom shouted in amazement!
Honey came rushing to the room, “Mum I am flying, I am flying” said Malcom.
Honey dropped the bottle of milk from her hand and said, “Uh James uh”, “Yes
dear”, “Malcom can talk!”, “what?! This cant be true. He is just eight months
old!”, “If you don’t believe it see for yourself.” James comes running into the
room, “Hi daddy, Good morning”, “Oh Jesus Christ, he can talk!” said James.
Malcom did some tricks in the air which he knew when he saw his cartoons.
aweome writing my baby..
ReplyDeleteSuper interesting story dear Akshat, keep it up
ReplyDeleteExcellent thoughts and creative writing.. Storytelling is an art and you have done a great composition Akshat blessings to you and Koshni you should be proud!
ReplyDeleteI love your imagination! This is very nice. Is this a series you are going to create? I would love to know more about Malcom's escapades.
ReplyDeleteMight take some time but it will come
DeleteAwesome....he is having great talent....keep it up Sunny boy.....looking forward to read more of your creative writing
ReplyDeleteLove you my boy....this indeed the first step....keep it up ! All the best😍!
ReplyDeleteNice work akhshat...
ReplyDeleteGreat attempt Akhshat....keep going!
ReplyDeleteVery nice akshat. Keep it up.
ReplyDeleteLovely first step of Akhshat ...
ReplyDeleteGod bless him.
Congratulations 💐💐💐
Creative writing ! Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteAkhshat, Congratulations :D
ReplyDeleteHope you achieve accolades for this and upcoming ones.Loads of love. :) <3
Thank you all
DeleteExcellent akshat .....keep it up..proud of you.
ReplyDeleteGreat going my budding writer..I think every child is unique and talented in its own way like Malcom.Being abnormal means a child with extraordinary power and We as parents should always support them to put that power and talent in place👍
ReplyDeleteThank you massi
DeleteKeep it up...
ReplyDeleteBhanPrakashBargoti,
ReplyDeleteExcellent deep thought, good going, continue my Dear Akshit. God bless you with more n much more laurels.